对对碰——恳请联坛高手斧正!

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  以下是我去年偶而得之的对联,请联坛高手评点、斧正!在此做揖谢过!

  又是一年色香味;shy;

  不如三春亲朋恩.shy;

  shy;

  松无花香,百受风霜也抬头;shy;

  竹本劲节,一经雨雪不垂头.shy;

  shy;

  大志未了羞迎世;shy;

  气概气派无多怕受恩.shy;

  shy;

  心连南国思红豆;shy;

  泪滴东风避杏花.shy;

  shy;

  翠竹虚心,还须劲节身竿曲;shy;

  夭桃有愧,只愿苍生面色红.shy;

  shy;

  脱俗山花未必艳;shy;

  无求斗室何须香.shy;

  shy;

  水活一泓禅境界;shy;

  山绿四面佛空间.shy;

  shy;

  水洗百衲脱尘世;shy;

  山容一僧近天然.shy;

  shy;

  钟声入耳如佛语;shy;

  春色归心是凡音.shy;

  shy;

  佛占名山难免俗;shy;

  僧抽好签仍是情.shy;

  shy;

  再无诳语,骗得善人忠诚泪;shy;

  从不杀生,专化施主血汗钱.shy;

  shy;

  有口无心,僧侣情侣九分似;shy;

  慈眉善目,佛门衙门八字开.shy;

  shy;

  车马喧哗,僧人修身更时髦;shy;

  森严壁垒,佛门静地如衙门.shy;

  shy;

  芦苇根浅爬地绿;shy;

  竹笋嘴尖指天青,shy;

  shy;

  未觉雪冷看梅落;shy;

  不察风言听雨声.shy;

  shy;

  羞囊过年人掩鼻;shy;

  妙对迎春我扬眉.shy;

  shy;

  莫名春愁客来散;shy;

  无恙年喜花去开.shy;

  shy;

  花逐春言童信遍;shy;

  酒拌年味叟尝全.shy;

  shy;

  让风送信,由雨传情,满意人生春几许?shy;

  邀月谈心,与友叙旧,高兴往事年何如?shy;

  shy;

  心静忽惊梅开落;shy;

  月明常伴鹤去来.shy;

  shy;

  儿童扑碟花间戏;shy;

  老叟贪杯酒处眠.shy;

  shy;

  入骨相思多红豆;shy;

  生根着处是绿藤.shy;

  shy;

  风吹断壁鼠留客;shy;

  醒吐余腥蚁起兵.shy;

  shy;

  年烛费蜡何妨少;shy;

  春雨浇花也怕多.shy;

  shy;

  年灯遥疑星列出;shy;

  春色近胜草青回.shy;

  shy;

  痛哭常忧天老去;shy;

  悲鸣欲共雁归来.shy;

  shy;

  为名远菊,因利疏梅,花差别每时每刻;shy;

  邀月谈心,与云叙旧,愿了解岁岁年年.shy;

  shy;

  小女爬竿知力上;shy;

  幺儿扑蝶新飞高.shy;

  shy;

  黄犬吠村叹曙色;shy;

  黑猴探井捞月光.shy;

  shy;

  春雨淋窗湿闺怨;shy;

  秋风扫地拭月愁.shy;

  shy;

  舌底做文,岂能尽如人意;shy;

  胸中研墨,但求无愧我心.

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